Psalm 64
I have prepared these psalms for our liturgy, trying to be as accurate in my translation as possible. The alternation between plain text and bold is for responsive reading. I invite feedback on the translation!
For the director.
A psalm
By David.
Hear, God, my voice in my meditation;
From the terror of my enemy guard my life.
Hide me from the counsel of evildoers,
From the tumult of the troublemakers,
Who have sharpened like the sword their tongue,
Have aimed their arrow, a bitter word,
To shoot in hiding places at the blameless;
Suddenly they shoot and they do not fear.
They strengthen themselves with an evil word;
They report hiding snares;
They have asked who will see them.
They search out iniquities: “We have perfected a searched-out plan.”
And the inward part of man and the heart is deep.
And God has shot them, with an arrow, suddenly;
There are their wounds,
And they make their tongue stumble against them.
They will shake — all who look upon them.
And all men will fear and declare the work of God,
And his act they will understand.
The righteous will rejoice in Yahweh and take refuge in him,
And they will boast, all the upright in heart.
A multitude of comments about the translation of this psalm:
(1) In line 1, the word translated “meditation” can include anything that occupies one’s attention, and so Holliday suggests such things as “thought, consideration, (object of) concern.” It can refer to a complaint, as it probably does here, but it may be broader than that. Hirsch suggests that the phrase here means “When I give expression to … my inner agitation.”
(2) In line 2, the word translated “terror” can also refer to “trembling.” Here, “the trembling of my enemy” is the trembling brought on by the presence of the enemy.
(3) In line 3, the word translated “counsel” here has the sense of “secret counsel” (Hirsch; cf. Amos 3:7) can also refer to a circle of confidants (Gen 49:6) and can be used in a good sense (Ps. 25:14; 55:15: “sweet counsel”).
(4) In line 5, Hirsch and some others have “whet” instead of “sharpened,” which is fine, but I am preparing these psalms for reading out loud in church. Read out loud, “whet” in connection with “tongue” will probably be heard as “wet.”
(5) In line 7, “hiding places” uses the same root as “Hide” in line 3. Many translations have “in secret places” or just “in secret.” NASB has “from concealment,” which probably captures the idea. It’s not the blameless man who is in hiding, but the attacker. As for “blameless,” the word tam includes the sense of integrity, wholeness, maturity, completion.
(6) In line 8, “strengthen for themselves an evil word” is a bit awkward. The verb can be used for strengthening in the sense of encouragement (2 Sam 11:25), and perhaps the meaning is that they encourage themselves with an evil word (plot, plan). But it seems more likely that it is the word which is being strengthened, the bitter word being shot like an arrow.
(7) In line 10, “they report hiding snares” may mean that they talk about all the snares they’ve hidden, boasting about what they’re doing (Alexander). But Hirsch may be right in taking this phrase to mean that as they tell or report (about whatever), they are laying snares.
(8) In line 11, in the phrase “Who will see them,” is the pronoun “them” a reference to the snares (line 10) or to the people themselves (Alexander)? The latter is how some of the early versions took it, changing the question to “Who will see us?”
(9) With regard to line 12: Okay, you try translating this. Literally: “They search out iniquities. We have perfected/completed a searched-out searching-out.” Alter emends the verb (from “we have completed” to “we have hidden”), but if we go with “completed,” Alter’s reading is something like this: “We have completed the utmost search.” But Hirsch thinks it means something like “Let them investigate inquities. We will be gone when a search is made.” But that seems like a stretch to me.
(10) Line 15 is pretty tough, and this is an attempt at a rendition. It seems to say “They are, their wounds/blows.” Hirsch has something closer to “their blows came to be.” NASB margin: “Their wounds happened.”
(11) Line 16 is extremely tough. The verb is third person plural, with a third person singular suffix: “They make him totter/stumble.” But many translations render this line as if the subject is God (“He makes them stumble”) or as if it is passive (“They are made to stumble”). Hirsch in his commentary says that the subject is most likely the blows/wounds from the previous verse and the object is the tongue (which can be masculine or feminine, BDB), but in his translation, he appears to take the subject as the enemies: “They made their own tongue a stumbling block unto themselves.” I’m not persuaded that the verb can have that sense. Perhaps the AV is closest: “They will make their own tongue to fall upon themselves,” or, better, “against themselves.”
(12) Line 17 contains a verb that is often taken to be from ndd (“to flee”), so that it reads “All will flee….” But it’s possible that whatever the root is, possibly nud, it refers to the sort of thing we find in Jeremiah 18:16 (“shake the head,” but there “the head” is explicitly mentioned) or Jeremiah 31:18 (“bemoan”). Hirsch suggests that it refers to inner agitation, to being deeply moved in some way, but nud itself has the sense of shaking and so that’s what I’ve used … for now.
The psalm seems to me to be structured as a chiasm (and thanks to Jeff Moss for his contributions as we talked about this today):
A. Hear, God, my voice in my meditation;
From the terror of my enemy guard my life.
B. Hide me from the counsel of evildoers,
From the tumult of the troublemakers,
C. Who have sharpened like the sword their tongue,
Have aimed their arrow, a bitter word,
D. To shoot in hiding places at the blameless;
Suddenly they shoot and they do not fear.
E. They strengthen themselves with an evil word;
They report hiding snares;
F. They have asked who will see them.
E’. They search out iniquities: “We have perfected a searched-out plan.”
And the inward part of man and the heart is deep.
D’. And God has shot them, with an arrow, suddenly;
There are their wounds,
C’. And they make their tongue stumble against them.
They will shake — all who look upon them.
B’. And all men will fear and declare the work of God,
And his act they will understand.
A’. The righteous will rejoice in Yahweh and take refuge in him,
And they will boast, all the upright in heart.
The A sections both deal with the voice of the righteous and with Yahweh’s protection.
The B sections contrast the counsel of the evildoers which leads to tumult and trouble with God’s work and God’s act.
The C sections deal with the tongue.
The D sections have arrows being shot.
The E sections are the words of the evildoers and their confidence.
The turning point, F, then is their question “Who will see us?”
May 3rd, 2012 at 3:30 pm
Exactly what I needed to read today, John.